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Untitled Echos by ~nikki-c:iconnikki-c:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


Tears form in my eyes
Feelings of loneliness, emptiness,
And void stand out
Tears come from deep down
Can't pinpoint one main cause,
I can hear my sobs echo
From time to time,
Feeling emotionally trapped
Tangled and involved in something
Bigger than myself
Makes my life hard to unwine,
I cannot hear my own thoughts,
Emotions over power and always
Seem to get the best of me,
Where the line lays between
My thoughts and reality
I cannot see,
Parts of me feel numb and dead
I cannot hear my own voice;
All is drowned out by the screams
That fill my head.
©2003-2010 ~nikki-c
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An event in my life hurt me really bad and this is the result

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~soultown Dec 3, 2003, 7:08:04 PM
:hug: Feel better... I'm sorry you're unhappy.

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Ribston Pippin'.
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~lovemenot Dec 3, 2003, 7:38:05 PM
hmmm whatever happended, sounds pretty painful and im sorry..

i like when you put your hand out the car window, and it gets so cold it goes numb, IT FEELS COOL!!

Anyways, i liked your poem, it put me into somewhat of an awe, keep up the good work.
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~bboyelusive Dec 4, 2003, 3:08:36 PM
seems like a bite from the hit-song from In My Eyes by Rufio. good one nic, always there to ripp 'em good. Just kidding, that's some beautiful work I want to see more. Oh, look at the time. Points at clock, I'll be in the ravine if you need me babe bye.

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:idea: :pointr: "getting paid like a biker with the best crank
Sprayed like a high ranked sniper in the West Bank" - MF Doom King Geedorah
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~nikki-c Dec 4, 2003, 3:15:11 PM
its okay, after i write poems i feel way better. thank you!
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~nikki-c Dec 4, 2003, 3:17:12 PM
saaweet! IM GLAD YOU LIKE IT! thank you
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~nikki-c Dec 4, 2003, 3:20:44 PM
ur funny sweetie! meet ya in the ravine after sunset! you will see more work soon! love ya. see ya soon babe
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~nikki-c Dec 29, 2003, 3:33:15 PM
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyy!!! i miss ya!!! see you soon!!!
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